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The day we met, the first word you said to me was hi.
Now I'm running a fever and I don't know why.

When I'm around you I feel light in the head,
and when you don't speak to me, I feel so dead.

You are my sickness, yet you are my cure.
I think I'm in love, that much I'm sure.

It seems that I'm love sick again...
In love with you, my dearest friend.
©2003-2009 ~Rei-Syndrom
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Author's Comments

Winter brings out emotions deep inside me, plus its cold. I really just felt like righting a love poem today, I don't write that many so i try to make them memorable. Hope you enjoy everyone.

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:icondivisal:
Awesome poem!!
I love this line:
''You are my sickness, yet you are my cure.''
Very nice.
:hug::kiss::licking: :giggle:

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''That which we manifest is before us...''
:iconkinnee:
Great poem. So full of emotion, yet so few words. You were able to write this very well :clap: I'm guessing that you know longing very well.

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          Of course I don't look busy. I did it right the first time :D
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I am an anime/anthro artist. I am no better nor worse than any of you.
I have the maturity to accept your art... Now will you accept mine?
Spread love, not hate.
:iconexperationunknown:
Ok - I have to :+fav: this cuz its SOOOOO good! I love this poem. :clap:



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:iconcudlpnk:
:w00t: Very wonderful...unfortunatley not the best subject for me right now..

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*HuG*
:iconrei-syndrom:
Thank you for your comment cudlpnk. >^_^< > ~_~< >^_^< ::Blinku::

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Don't question the insanity.
Trust me it only gets weirder.

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